Welcome back bloggers,
This week I have been learning free write. I am proud of this work because I have used paragraphs. And capital letters. The part I found challenging was paragraphs because I had to do three paragraphs and they all about different things.
Blog you later.
Kia ora Jhyral,
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing your free write with us. I like the way you have stated what your wish is and then described it for your readers. My hint to you for your writing is that when I is on it's own it is a capital I not i. eg I would give some away not i would give some away.
Are you still happy with your wishes or would you change any of them? Why/Why not?
I look forward to seeing more of your fabulous work.
Mrs Taylor :)